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why can't he see..why can't he open his eyes and see what is right in front of him..why can't he see how i feel for him..why does he act like it doesn't exist..why can't he see that because of him..because of him and only him my life is turning around..because of him i am happy, i am laughing..i am smiling.. why can't he give me what i'm trying to give to him..my heart..personal issues aside mistrust misplaced..i trust him..more than i have trusted in a long time..why can't he see that..companionship i seek..life long companionship..a deeply profound connection..a life long thing..knowing how to ascertain what i desire isn't the problem..i wonder though when will he give me what i want so badly in return..not a matter of not knowing what i want..or how to get it..it's being given it..second chances finally given so thankful..the cloud has cleared..lost in my own thoughts..my own world..i make him think and make him wonder..when all i want is his love..to hear him say it, to feel it from deep within him..my heart is his..i need him so badly and want him just the same..in his arms is the only place i wanna be..how i wish he could see this..how i dream of the day when he takes the chains off his heart and lets me in..my once broken smile..he alone has fixed..i crave his touch, relish in his kiss, but always i'm left wanting more..when will his heart be mine..when will he open his heart and mind to me trying to give him mine..i'm falling and falling hard..will he catch me though..

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eyes wide open...
written by John Doe , July 21, 2009

My thoughts to this paper
A shiver in my spine
To think that my search
Has found such a find…

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eyes wide open
written by Decorus Angelus , July 21, 2009

shiver once
shiver twice
your search
in and of itself
has uncovered
such a find
a rare diamond
one of its kind
hold it tight in your grasp
treat it wih tender loving care
open up your heart
and find true love if you dare..

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Kinder to tell you now but . . .
written by Clifford Scott Carson , July 21, 2009

1. He doesn't want to give you his heart because he doesn't have one. WAKE UP.

2. The "happiness" that you're feeling when you're around him is happiness you're allowing yourself to feel and not so much due to HIM, but due to the power you're giving him when he's around. Learn to make yourself feel that way with or without him.

3. If he's making you feel not so good about yourself and you're "trusting" him, I'd stop that right now, otherwise you're asking to feel more of the same.

4. You're problem is alot of people's problem. You're looking for someone else to "complete you", without knowing you're complete on your own.
As soon as you realize you're complete on your own and you don't need a man to complete you, the better off you'll be. Otherwise, you're in for a lot more pain and hurt. It's inevitable. We all have to reach that realization, otherwise we're stuck in storybook brainwashing circles.

5. Guess what? He's not going to let the chains off of his heart. KNOW WHY? Because he doesn't HAVE ONE. Not the way you need it. He doesn't have any concern for anyone but himself. That's just the plain truth. Get it? It's high time you figured that out otherwise he'll always have you stuck wanting more. That's his game.




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written by Decorus Angelus , July 25, 2009

its just a poem... not to mention you don't even know me to begin with so how the hell can you judge what "my problem" is much less what I am looking for and from whom... or for that matter if i'm happy or not and how and what makes me happy.. i mean hell you can't even find happiness yourself..you find comfort in belittling others..lastly..you don't know who i wrote the poem about or what the hell it was about so just stop trying to act like you know everything about everything and everyone..you don't...get a life..a real one..
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DUH!
written by Clifford Scott Carson , July 26, 2009

I was referring to the poem and the concept of it being taken as a serious effort. That said, from your own personal "writings" it's quite evident that you're a person of little mystery. A WHOLE lot of "attack" but no mystery. Not all that much to figure out. The writings on the wall.

yawn . . .

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Duh!
written by Decorus Angelus , July 27, 2009

shut up cliff!..i'm really sick of your crap and honestly I really don't care anymore..you suck as a person anyway..bite my white irish ass..
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The Sting
written by Clifford Scott Carson , July 27, 2009

Oh don't get your stinger out of joint queen bee. It takes two to feud and I'm not one of them. In fact, you can ask anyone who knows me. I'll carry an argument just so far. This is the internet and nothing should be taken that seriously, even your comments about my work.

Think what you want, but you don't know me well enough to truly dislike me and visa versa.

Have a nice evening.

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