Cliff appears to be an idiot..

Seriously?! Cliff definatly seems to be a freakin idiot.. Why do you have to attack people who are just stating a fact/truth about a situation.. If you were grown and mature you wouldnt have attacked either one of us about the situation you would have just stated your opinion and went on with it.. If you dont believe thats all there is to the story then dont worry about it, but instead you attack and make yourself look like a complete a$$.. Having an opinion is one thing and obviously you can voice your opinion on here (duh) but i never knew attacking someone else who is also voicing there opinion was the way to go.. shouldnt we all be friends.. you may not have to give sympathy but jeez what happened to 'if you dont have something nice to say dont say nothing at all'.. i do understand thinking there might have been somethin more to it but when you were told there wasnt by two people why attack.. if you dont believe then just move on seriously.. what an idiot..

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Sing it Sister....
written by Morgan Hill , July 21, 2009

Sing it loud and proud...

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And your poetry SUCKS
written by Clifford Scott Carson , July 21, 2009

Since she's taking pot shots at me, I consider it open season. Heather, kinder to tell you now sweetie, but you're poem reads like a junior high school girl's crush on a football player who doesn't know she's alive. Seriously, it's as puerile and simple minded as anything I've ever read outside of the stuff on here written by Angela Murphy. That junk is just down right embarrassing to read. Particularly the one entitled NOTICE ME. Talk about insecure. Hey if you're in your teens I'll over look it. Other wise, educate yourself to the finer points of writing before you click "publish", because anyone who reads this dribble is in for a laugh. Either that or a toothache.

. . . eww, so saccharine, couldn't you just wants to throw up?

As tear drops stroll down her shiny face

The man of her dreams walks into the room
She knows nothing to do but continue to pace
They begin to think the relationship is doom
Being together for a long while now
Ending the love that they have will be tough
Now all they have to do is work out how
Painfully both of them have had enough
Apart they shall become for their own good
Not wanting to split they walk out the door
If they wanted to stay one then they could
All you see is tears falling on the floor
This relationship has gone down the drain
Of course they are both in terrible pain.

NEWS FLASH CHICK: Not only has the relationship gone down the drain, but YOU'RE the only one in "terrible pain". Trust me, he doesn't give a shit. Wake up and smell the coffee, it's been burning for some time now.

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oh and MORGAN
written by Clifford Scott Carson , July 21, 2009

You're a distant 3rd as far as bad writing, poor english and bad grammar is concerned.

But I will remember this lover . . . .

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point proven..
written by Heather Clements , July 21, 2009

wow like i said. you have nothing better to do but critize people. BTW it was written in HS thank you very much and almost got published.. but anyways i dont care what you think about my writing.. im not a teenager anymore but it was written when i was one.. so thank you very much for proving my point you are an idiot and have nothing better to do than bash people..

and as far as you saying morgan has bad grammar and poor english well i hate to say it but not everything you put on here is proper either so why talk trash about someone elses if yours isnt perfect all the time either.. if we can read it and understand it and it gets the point across why does it matter..

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Sounds of bitter failure
written by Morgan Hill , July 21, 2009

I understand not all feedback will be praising but to be down right spiteful and vile is a low blow. You need to go out and get laid or something… get your bell rung, drain your dragon, choke the chicken, pop one off.. something... anything… I think there would be peace in the Middle East if they would just drop some porn on the place and quit hiding their women under a giant black blanket… What ever it is that crawled up your ass and died, pull it out, cook it and enjoy. What ever you choose to do move on past your egotistical know it all better than now attitude. You’re awfully critical of poetry for a pissy poser that hasn’t posted a single poem…

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You can dish it out, but you can't take it
written by Clifford Scott Carson , July 21, 2009

Look dear, you're the one who wrote the ARTICLE entitled, "Cliff appears to be an idiot", rather than just respond in the comment section. If you can't stand the heat get out of the boiler room. In other words, don't play with the big boys, you'll be in way over your head.

Oh, and one more thing, My articles are properly written with correct spelling.

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disagree
written by Heather Clements , July 21, 2009

I wrote the article instead of commenting due to the fact it was off subject of the original article.. DUH.. who said i cant stand the heat? im pretty sure i have dished it right back at ya and honestly ive got more i could say but i wont because theres no need for it.. i got out what needed to be said..

oh and i have to disagree with u.. look at your comment about my poem.. it says "couldn't you just wants to throw up?" hmm doesnt sound right to me and i saw somethin else also but i forgot but if you really wanna know ill go find it again and let ya know..

no one is perfect.. a presons personal writing wouldnt be their personal writing if it was always perfect it has to have personality to it..why bash? obviously you think you are better than everyone else and your not..

like he said.. you can bash other peoples poetry but you havent posted any..must be because you dont know how to write poetry so your jealous and bash others cuz its not written the way you want it to be..

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As a matter of fact, I could write better poetry.
written by Clifford Scott Carson , July 22, 2009

Look lady, you're the one that took this to a whole new level by making an "article" out of it with my name on it. Just look above. I didn't put your name on an article, so OWN that behavior and quit making excuses.

And FYI, I noticed the typographical error I made in that comment after I clicked "add comment". Unfortunately this website isn't sophisticated enough to do changes on comments. So much for proof reading.

And BELIEVE ME, if I were to write a poem it wouldn't be as icky as the ones you and Angela write. Trust me. Nor would they be as bone headed as the ones Morgan writes.

Case closed. End of discussion.

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This is in response to Morgan's snide remark
written by Clifford Scott Carson , July 22, 2009

I don't know who asked you to join this discussion. It had nothing to do with you, so why stick your nose into it? Also, don't worry about my sex life so much, I get plenty, trust me. Besides, what I do in bed is none of your business, so worry about you're own.

Also, if you'll notice, my articles have WAY more hits on them than any of yours. Why? Because there are people out there that seek out my posts and have for many years, not just on this site, but several others.

Top that!

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your right..
written by Heather Clements , July 22, 2009

Your right i did take it to the next level because like i said it was off subject of the other article where you started your bashing so why not bash back.. your the one that can dish but not handle obviously so take your own advice and dont play with the big dogs cuz obviously you are in over your head..

OMG are you seriously gonna bash him more.. he stuck his nose in it due to the fact it was his article and you basically calling him a liar that started all this so yea im pretty sure he is so in the right by voicing his OPINION also.. wow what do ya know..

honestly who cares about hits around here.. we are not in competition with each other and not everyone cares about how many hits we can get.. ITS NOT A COMPETITION.. jus cuz you think it is cuz you think you are better than all of us doesnt mean we do.. we are hear to voice opinions and thats what he did about his BS ticket.. your the one that took it to the next level by calling him a liar and stating there had to be more to the story when there isnt..

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The solution
written by Clifford Scott Carson , July 22, 2009

I'll tell you what Heather, why don't you go grab a pen and write another poem about how the man of your dreams has just walked out of the room. Why don't you do that. Oh, and while you're at it, why not sketch yourself a bowl of sour grapes to go along with it.

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no thank you
written by Heather Clements , July 22, 2009

Nah i dont need to write another poem because the man of my dreams hasnt walked outta the room. if i write anything else its gonna be about how our society these days are rude, crude, inconsiderate and extremely judgemental about other people.. yes i know i am bein jus as judgemental about you but thats because you started it..

bowl of sour grapes? is that the best you have cuz honestly i like sour grapes they are kinda tasty.. take your own advice once again or morgans advice and go whack it or eat some sour grapes yourself..

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TURN ON THE LIGHT, LOOK IN THE MIRROR
written by Clifford Scott Carson , July 22, 2009

Don't worry, I'm not nasty like you and I'm not infusing sex into a conversation that has nothing to do with sex like you and Morgan. And you're WRONG about who started this. My response was to Morgan allowing himself to meet up, yet again with another bone headed situation that involves cops and courts. Albeit Georgia cops, who by themselves need handling a particular way. Legalized thugs with egos. However, you're the one that butted into the conversation and put her 2 cents in. But then I suppose your friends would be wealthy people if they had a nickel for every time you butted in your 2 cents. The original topic had to do with the citation written out as "disorderly conduct", rather than dumping without a permit. That in itself is suspect to suspicion and questions. I didn't post that article, Morgan did. YOU made my comments an ARTICLE with my NAME on it. Did I do that to you? So turn on the light and look in the mirror. YOU'RE the one who started this.

That said, I understand that poetry, like music is an individual thing. I don't like the icky sophomoric dribble I've read on this site, but I'll tell you what? I'm willing to put my money where my mouth is. I'll write a poem.

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written by Heather Clements , July 22, 2009

nasty like me? how am i nasty? sex is what makes everyone happy so it seems you arent gettin enuf to be so down on everyones poetry and writings all the time.. not jus mine and morgans but everyones.. it seems you never have anything uplifting or nice to say to anyone.. how was his article bone headed.. he wrote what happened and that it was BS.. wow seems legit to me.. and yes u are the one that started it by calling him a liar without saying it so i backed him up since i was there.. obviously you didnt believe him so thought maybe if someone else told u that is all that happened you would leave him alone and stop callin him a liar.. guess not..

about the poetry.. if you dont like it so much why do you keep reading it.. just stay outta that section if you hate reading it instead of critzing everyone that writes somethin in there..

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You LIVE on disinformation.
written by Clifford Scott Carson , July 22, 2009

How are you nasty? Look above to the title of this article. I would have thought that obvious.

Also obvious is the way you process information. You LIVE to misunderstand a person. You and Morgan have that in common. Rather than get to the root or essence of what the situation is really about, you choose to run with your overly active imagination and jump to false conclusions. How old are you anyway? I was voicing my opinion (in retaliation) about the poetry (if you can call it that) on this site. What does that have to do with sex? Seems like you and Morgan are the frustrated horny ones.

Also, I didn't say Morgan's article was "bone headed". I was referring to his knack of getting himself in trouble with the law. Quite avoidable to any sensible person. Another way you misunderstand. Also, I didn't call him a "liar". That's your word missy. I merely questioned the citation written as "disorderly conduct". I might have been born at night, but it wasn't last night.

As far as the poetry is concerned. I've only read a few of them, but they're so laughable how can you not make fun of it, especially the "NOTICE ME" one. Did I make a comment on anyone of them? No, I didn't. You made it open season when you posted this hostile article of yours. Fair game on my part.

Now why don't you go back to your easy bake oven and let other people fight their own battles for themselves.

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to each his own..
written by Decorus Angelus , July 22, 2009

cliff.."can't we all just get along?" criticizing other people for their opinions, beliefs, feelings and words is totally not what life, love much less this site is about...this is a place where ANYONE and EVERYONE can have a voice, where we can express ourselves freely without fear of judgement, criticism and nasty words..to each his own cliff..every person is different, we all write differently, we all think differently..and no one is wrong for how and what they think..not even you..God made us all different for a reason..and no one deserves to be treated the way you are treating them..do you seriously think that badgering poor heather, criticizing her for her opinions and her wordage and her way of writing is going to get you anywher? That it is going to buy you friends?, Bashing morgan for his beautful use of poetic license and his amazingly thought out opinions and methods to things isn't going to get you real far either..is this how you wish to be treated? how would you like it if every stupid word you uttered or every insane thought you entertained was criticized, put down, diminshed, belittled, and bashed to hell and back? is this how you would want to be treated? seriously man..step outside the box for just a minute and think about how you are treating others..and ask yourself if you would like it if someone treated you as horribly as you are treating these people you don't even know..

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OMG, another one
written by Clifford Scott Carson , July 22, 2009

This isn't your day to teach that lesson whoever you are. Before you jump down my throat, back up and take a look at who started this post in the first place. Yes, "poor poor Heather". So you've got things a little twisted here. I didn't start this discussion. Poor Heather did. She may play the victim, but this post proves otherwise. As for Morgan and his "beautiful use of poetic license and amazing thought out opinions", I could show you some examples of Mr. Hills "poetic license" that would stand your hair up on end. His beautiful use of poetic license is about as subtle as a wet hornet. But I'll keep those emails to myself. You can go on believing he's the beautiful poetic? LMFAO

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what the heck..
written by Heather Clements , July 22, 2009

seriously.. i may have started this article but i didnt start the whole situation and obviously other people feel the same way and they just havent said anything and i was the first one with guts to post it on here.. im not playing victim i could care less i dont want sympathy i want people like you to appreciate other peoples writings for what they are and not critize them all the time.. its not far to them.. they think they are writing good, which they probably are, and you go and bash em.. its horrible and obviously you need to get a life.. i jus dont understand why you feel the need to bash morgan, me and anyone else who has written poetry or anything for that matter.. its stupid no one else is on here bashing. we are stating opinions yes like morgan said maybe not what the other person wants to hear but its not complete disrespectful bashing like what you are doing.. take a look in the mirror yourself and smell your own coffee, no one likes to be bashed..

get a life!!!

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Let this be the end of this.
written by Clifford Scott Carson , July 22, 2009

Okay Heather I'll let you have the last word. Far be it from me to discourage anyones creative writing. As I said before, I didn't make a comment on any of the "poems" on this site. The ones I read anyway. You made my name the headline of this article and insulted me in the title. Suffice to say, you are a troublemaker and there's no other word for you.

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thanks for the laugh...
written by Decorus Angelus , July 23, 2009

cliff..i must say you have definately made yourself a name and left a lasting impression in my mind..as an abusive, rude, undereducated, totally self absorbed, egotistical moron..kudos to you man!
" and the award for biggest ass of the year goes out to cliff carson"

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I aim to please
written by Clifford Scott Carson , July 24, 2009

So happy I could be your evening's amusement and entertainment you piss elegant snob

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aim's a bit off...
written by Decorus Angelus , July 24, 2009

that makes absolutely no sense whatsoever.... guess that's to be expected from the general vicinity from whence it came...have a blessed day!

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Different Pseudonym
written by Clifford Scott Carson , July 24, 2009

"have a blessed day". Is that your way of saying you're morally superior? Let's get down to brass tacks. The chances are good that this is really ----- pretending to be someone else and using a different pseudonym log on name. Come on ------, aka John Doe, aka Decorus Angelus. Fess up. This is you right? Oily oily oxen free! Come out, come out wherever you are!

Yep, I thought so. But that's okay, don't worry. I won't tell anyone. It will be our secret. Just between you and me. Nobody else has to know. I can go along with a gag and I can keep a secret. Mums the word.

You have a blessed day too.

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Now your jjust pissing me off...
written by John Doe , July 24, 2009

I don't care what you say, how you say it or who you say it who... but leave me out of it... and NO she is not me.. I'm going to see her right now though and as I give her a kiss I'm going to be thinking about how lonely you must be to spew such vile negativity all the time...
How long have you known me? Would I say 'Have a blessed day'? Use your brain dumb ass...

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John Doe revealed
written by Clifford Scott Carson , July 24, 2009

Yep, that's -------- alright. At least John Doe is ---------. Hey ----------, how ya doin'? Nobody knows your writing better than I do. It's pure ------- all the way. I don't think calling your pseudonym log on name out is being "vile or negative". Com' on, everybody that really knows you knew it. You never really fooled me. I knew it from the beginning. Hey, better to tell you now, right? Instead of keeping you in the dark.
No need to get upset, the day will come when you'll get straightened out with your thinking too Unfortunately when that day does come the world somehow becomes a lonelier place. Even with that conclusion you won't want to go back to the way things use to be.

Until one gets straightened out with ones thinking they're still kind of the "victim" in life.

So, let me get this straight, you and "Decorus" are an item of some sort or is Heather and Decorus the same person? Starting to get that one needs a program to tell all the players on this thing. Too many pseudonyms. Well, at least I know I'm me.

"PROGRAMS, PROGRAMS, GET YOUR PROGRAMS HERE FOLKS! CAN'T TELL THE PLAYERS WITHOUT A PROGRAM"

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cliff...
written by Decorus Angelus , July 24, 2009

okay cliff..look i am decorus angelus..aka beautiful angel in latin..aka butterfly chic.. aka Angela..sir I pray for your soul as it is surely in the hands of the devil himself..i hope and pray that you seek redemption before judgement day or you will for sure spend your eternity in perpetual damnation for the inhumane way that you continue to treat other people..i feel so sorry for you cliff..you must be so lonely and miserable and it shows in the way that you continuously abuse other people with your words..to each his own cliff..no one sits here and criticizes you for your "mediocre" artwork..or for your point of view..yet you sit here day after day criticizing heather, me, morgan and who knows who else just for being who we are, who God above made us to be..what is so wrong with us> Who are you that should be so great and mighty to sit here and judge me..someone you don't even know..my poetry mediocre? that is your opinion and you are entitled to it, however if it is so mediocre then why is it published in 5 different literary works of art? why have i gotten award after award for my poetry if it is just mediocre..cliff it is so obvious that you are hurting inside and i am so sorry that something in your life has been so horrible and traumatic as to cause you to lash out at other people ..it is so sad that you get your boost in self esteem from hurting other people....it takes a real weak man to do what you continue to do..i will continue to pray for you..and btw..Have A Blessed Day!

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Decorus is SLUMMING
written by Clifford Scott Carson , July 24, 2009

Look you patronizing condescending little old biddy, I don't need your sympathy, so go slumming somewhere else. Furthermore, I don't need you to "pray for my soul". Worry about your own. You're the one brainwashed by religion, not me, let's get that straight right now. You know nothing about God except what you've been taught. Everything you are is what you think you should be. You're so lacking in what I have.

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omg
written by Heather Clements , July 24, 2009

OMG!! i havent said anything in like 2 days.. i quit jus like you said.. end of discussion.. and you bring me back into it.. this is me, i dont have another name so leave me out of it now i ended the discussion just like you said..thank you

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