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Written by Decorus Angelus
Sunday, 06 September 2009 13:08
his touch like silk
caressing my skin
every inch of my flesh
exhilaration beyond words
his lips like butterfly wings
tantalize my own
unrelenting passion
like a fire it burns within me
his eyes like a glimpse into the unknown
pierce my own
drawing me in he reads me
like a book
I succumb to him
his body like a greek god
beautiful and magnificent physique
my Adonis, my angel boy
becoming entwined with my own
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LET'S EXAMINE THIS
written by Clifford Scott Carson , September 07, 2009
EXAMINING THIS POEM ONE PARAGRAPH AT A TIME:
his touch like silk
caressing my skin
every inch of my flesh
exhilaration beyond words
pierce my own
[ This is actually a nice beginning, good at leading the reader in]
his lips like butterfly wings
tantalize my own
unrelenting passion
like a fire it burns within me
[ I take it that the corniness of this is deliberate?]
his eyes like a glimpse into the unknown
pierce my own
drawing me in he reads me
like a book
I succumb to him
[ Arguably the best piece of words in the poem. Those are the best lines. As a footnote: To the person who is really feeling this way, Wow, there goes your power. You just handed all your power and probably your soul over to him . He'll decide what he wants to do with it. Ouch. Is that deliberate too? ]
his body like a greek god
beautiful and magnificent physique
my Adonis, my angel boy
becoming entwined with my own
[ Another nice group of words. I happen to know who the author of this poem is talking about btw ]
Overall: Interesting, corny, mysterious, intriguing.
written by Clifford Scott Carson , September 07, 2009
EXAMINING THIS POEM ONE PARAGRAPH AT A TIME:
his touch like silk
caressing my skin
every inch of my flesh
exhilaration beyond words
pierce my own
[ This is actually a nice beginning, good at leading the reader in]
his lips like butterfly wings
tantalize my own
unrelenting passion
like a fire it burns within me
[ I take it that the corniness of this is deliberate?]
his eyes like a glimpse into the unknown
pierce my own
drawing me in he reads me
like a book
I succumb to him
[ Arguably the best piece of words in the poem. Those are the best lines. As a footnote: To the person who is really feeling this way, Wow, there goes your power. You just handed all your power and probably your soul over to him . He'll decide what he wants to do with it. Ouch. Is that deliberate too? ]
his body like a greek god
beautiful and magnificent physique
my Adonis, my angel boy
becoming entwined with my own
[ Another nice group of words. I happen to know who the author of this poem is talking about btw ]
Overall: Interesting, corny, mysterious, intriguing.
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